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Yay its me birthday today ^^ time to get very drunk

So time for the next part in my survival story :D here goes! I pulled the young man up and propped him against the rock out the way, his breathing was shallow but i figured it was more down to shock and trauma than anythign, so  i left him there and scrabbled up onto my feet. The plane was roaring now, the heat scorching hot from 20 metres away, i tore a strip of my shirt off, wrapped it around my nose and mouth and went toward the blazing inferno to salvage what i could. The smoke was acrid and stung my eyes, even through the makeshift mask i could taste the stench of burning flesh and my stomach twisted and turned, i struggled to keep it i

** copied from my original journal on my account (didnt know how else to submit it xD)....i submitted it here to get some critique and to see if anyone actually likes what i write xD...so hope you enjoy! ** So i sat down to watch a movie and just had an urge to write a short story, nothing dramatic or violent or anything i'd even usually read, just something that happened in my mind, so here goes. We walked down the lane, hand in hand, gazing around at the houses beside us. It was one of those days, not sunny, not cold, but cloudy and warm at the same time, cosy. The village we lived in was relatively new, but looked as if it had been pluck